Everyone in this book already has the thing they are travelling to Oz to ask for, and the book lets them spend the whole journey refusing to believe it.
Where you can see it:
- Chapter VI — The Tin Woodman steps on a beetle, weeps until his jaw rusts shut, and then explains that because he has no heart he must take extra care never to be cruel. The book states his own contradiction in his own voice.
- Chapter VII — At the ditch the Scarecrow works out the crossing and volunteers to ride first so that nobody who can be hurt goes first; the Lion says plainly that he is terribly afraid of falling and then jumps four times carrying each of them over.
- Chapter XV — Oz tells each of them outright that they already have it — the Scarecrow is learning something every day, the Lion has the only courage there is, the Woodman is lucky to be without a heart. All three hear it and ask for the object anyway.
- Chapter XVI — The gifts are bran and pins, a silk heart stuffed with sawdust, and a drink out of a green bottle. Nothing changes except that each of them now believes.
- Chapter XXIII — Glinda tells Dorothy the Silver Shoes would have carried her home the first day she arrived. Dorothy has been wearing them since Chapter III.
Where the class is in the book
| Session | Reading | Minutes |
|---|---|---|
| 1 | Chapters I-VI read before this session | 35 |
| 2 | Chapters VII-VIII read before this session | 35 |
| 3 | Chapters IX-XIV complete | 40 |
| 4 | Chapters XV-XVII complete | 35 |
| 5 | Chapters XVIII-XXIV complete; book finished | 40 |
| 6 | Book complete; students work from the ledger | 40 |
The Already-Had-It Ledger
One row per session: the chapter and moment, who is being watched, what that character says is missing, what the character actually does in the moment, and — from Session 4 onward — what Oz hands them for it later.
Created in Session 1. Used by The Session 6 spoken argument, which requires two rows that pull in different directions.
Session 6
A two-minute spoken argument answering whether the journey to Oz was necessary, built on two ledger rows that point different ways and ending on a stated position.
Draws on sessions 1, 2, 4, 5.
The sessions
1Three Lists of What Is Missing
Students find the sentence where each traveller says what he is missing, then watch the book contradict the Tin Woodman in the same chapter he makes his claim. They build the ledger the whole unit runs on and fill its first row.
The Tin Woodman tells you he cannot feel and then cries over an insect, so what a character says about himself is evidence about him rather than a fact about him.
This session runs in all three. How a student takes the book in is not the same question as how hard their work is.
- Inherits: nothing — this is the opener
- Leaves: The Already-Had-It Ledger, created, with Row 1 complete through column four.
| Step | What to do |
|---|---|
| Open with the beetle | Read the beetle passage in Chapter VI aloud, through to the Woodman explaining that people with hearts have something to guide them. Ask the question and take three answers without settling it. |
| Three claims, located | Send students to find and mark one sentence each: the Scarecrow saying what he has no brains for in Chapter III, the Woodman in Chapter V, the Lion in Chapter VI. Marking only — no writing yet. |
| What he says against what he does | The Tin Woodman only. Students record two things he says about himself and two things he does, each labelled said or did, each with a chapter number. The two must not come from the same chapter. |
| Build the ledger | Rule up the five columns on the board and have students copy them. Complete Row 1 together using the beetle. Say out loud that column five stays empty until Session 4, and leave it visibly blank. |
| Column four alone | Students write column four themselves: what the Woodman actually does in this moment, in their own words. Circulate; do not supply wording. |
| Exit ticket | Collect the one-line answer at the door. |
He is not lying. He is telling you what he believes about himself. Go back to his last two sentences and write down what he thinks a heart is for — that is the attitude we are describing.
Word for word on all three worksheets, so one closing discussion covers the room. If a Support answer and an Extension answer would not belong in the same conversation, the session needs rewriting.
Pre-teach the three book words listed below before the lesson, not the idea. Give the says/does page with the two column headings already written and an example row filled from Chapter V so the shape is visible. Allow the attitude line to be spoken to you before it is written, and accept it in the student's first language if the evidence beneath it is in English.
- The Already-Had-It Ledger sheet, five columns, six blank rows
- Says and Does page, one per student
- Exit ticket slips, six to a page
- The ledger can be ruled up in an exercise book — five columns across a double page
- Sticky tabs for marking the three claim sentences; folded paper strips work as well
What He Says, What He Does (Helper Version)
- The Tin Woodman says he has no ______ . I found this in Chapter ___ .
- One thing he SAYS about himself: “______” (Chapter ___)
- One thing he DOES: ______ (Chapter ___)
- The two chapters I used are different: yes / no
- His attitude toward himself is that he is ______ . Choose one and finish it: not able to feel / dangerous to others / needing to be careful.
- Ledger Row 1, column four, in my own words: ______
- Anchor question — everyone answers this one. What does the Tin Woodman believe about himself, and what does he do that makes that hard to believe? He believes he is ______ . But he ______ .
- Check — I have a chapter number next to everything I wrote.
Says and Does: The Tin Woodman
- The sentence where he states what he is missing (Chapter ___): ______
- SAYS 1 (Chapter ___): ______
- SAYS 2 (Chapter ___): ______
- DOES 1 (Chapter ___): ______
- DOES 2 (Chapter ___): ______
- My two chapters are ___ and ___ . They are different.
- His attitude toward himself, in one sentence: ______
- How the author shows it — through what he says, what he does, or what the narrator tells us? Name which, and how you know: ______
- Ledger Row 1, column four, in my own words: ______
- Anchor question — everyone answers this one. What does the Tin Woodman believe about himself, and what does he do that makes that hard to believe? ______
- Check — every line above has a chapter number, and column four is mine, not copied.
Two Travellers, One Contradiction
- The Tin Woodman: attitude, and the two chapters that show it. ______
- A second traveller: attitude, and the two chapters that show it. ______
- Which one does the book undercut more plainly, and by what means — his own words, his actions, or the narrator's? ______
- The single strongest piece of evidence you have, and why it beats the others: ______
- Ledger Row 1, column four, written so that someone who has not read Chapter VI would understand it: ______
- Anchor question — everyone answers this one. What does the Tin Woodman believe about himself, and what does he do that makes that hard to believe? ______ Then: does the book agree with him, or with what he does?
- Check — a chapter number on every claim, and a reason rather than an impression in the comparison.
- tedious — so long and dull it wears you out (Chapter III, the Scarecrow explaining life on the pole)
- husky — rough and low in sound — not the dog, and not strong (Chapter III, the Scarecrow speaks in a rather husky voice)
- regret — the feeling of wishing you had not done something (Chapter VI, tears of sorrow and regret over the beetle)
- The claim sentences: Scarecrow in Chapter III says he is stuffed and so has no brains at all. Tin Woodman in Chapter V explains the tinsmith gave him no heart. Lion in Chapter VI calls himself a coward.
- SAYS, Chapter VI: he knows very well he has no heart, and so must take great care never to be cruel or unkind. He also says that people with hearts have something to guide them and need never do wrong.
- DOES, Chapter VI: steps on the beetle by accident, weeps until the tears rust his jaws shut, and afterward steps over an ant so as not to harm it.
- DOES, Chapter V: he tells Dorothy his story and asks to come along; accept any located action from Chapter V so the two-chapter rule is genuinely met.
- The attitude to look for: he regards himself as unable to feel, and therefore as someone who must substitute care for feeling. Accept any wording that holds those two halves together. A student who writes only “he is sad” has named a mood, not an attitude — ask what he believes about himself.
- Column four at this grade should say something close to: he cried over an insect he did not mean to kill. Accept anything accurate and in the student's own words. Do not accept the book's sentence copied out.
| Part of the standard | Practised in | Visible in |
|---|---|---|
| Identify the character's perspective — the attitude he holds toward himself | Step 2, students locate and mark the sentence where each traveller states what he lacks; Step 3 names the Woodman's attitude in their own words | Marked sentences in the book and the attitude line at the top of the says/does page |
| Describe how the author develops it — naming the specific means (what the character says, what he does, what the narrator reports) | Step 3, two things the Woodman says and two things he does, each labelled said or did | The four labelled rows on the says/does page, each carrying a chapter reference |
| Develops — shown across more than one moment, not asserted from one line | Step 3 requires evidence from two different chapters; Step 5 asks what changes between them | Two distinct chapter references on the says/does page and the written answer in column four |
| Describe in a literary text — the description is tied to located text, not to recall | Steps 2, 3 and 5 all require a chapter reference beside every claim | Ledger Row 1, which is rejected if a cell has no chapter reference |
- Catalogue access facts (text_on_screen, narration, illustrations_displayed) were not supplied for this title, so all three are assumed true and every mode is available. If Listening on this platform can mean text-off, the exact_wording sessions need rechecking.
2One Ditch, Three Proofs
One obstacle, one page, and all three travellers do the exact thing each says he cannot. Students take the scene apart into setting, conflict, event and characterization, then write how it moves the story forward, and record it as Row 2 of the ledger.
One obstacle at one ditch makes all three travellers do the exact thing each of them says he cannot do.
This session runs in all three. How a student takes the book in is not the same question as how hard their work is.
- Inherits: The Already-Had-It Ledger with Row 1 from Session 1.
- Leaves: Row 2 of the Already-Had-It Ledger, holding the Scarecrow's plan and the Lion's admission.
| Step | What to do |
|---|---|
| Stand at the edge | Read the ditch description aloud. Students mark two details that make it impossible to go round or climb down. Take the question and leave it open. |
| Who solves it | Students find the lines where the Scarecrow works out the crossing and where he offers to ride first because he is the one who cannot be hurt. Copy both onto the page with the chapter. |
| Who is afraid and goes anyway | Students find the Lion saying he is terribly afraid of falling, then count his crossings. Both go on the page. Ask what the count is evidence of. |
| From obstacle to plot | The framed paragraph. Sentence one names the conflict. The middle says what it forces each of the two to reveal. The last sentence says what it lets happen next. |
| Row 2 | Build Row 2 of the Already-Had-It Ledger. Both the Scarecrow and the Lion go in the same row, because it is one scene, and the event column lists the crossings in order. |
| Exit ticket | Collect at the door. |
Find the sentence where he says how he feels about falling, and count how many times he crosses after saying it. Bravery that costs nothing is not what the book is showing you.
Word for word on all three worksheets, so one closing discussion covers the room. If a Support answer and an Extension answer would not belong in the same conversation, the session needs rewriting.
Give the paragraph frame with all three openers written out and the conflict sentence half-built. Pair for the locating steps and let the pair share one marked book. The count of the Lion's crossings is a number, not a sentence — accept it as evidence on its own and build the wording around it in talk before writing.
- One Ditch, Three Proofs page with the paragraph frame
- The Already-Had-It Ledger, continued from Session 1
- Exit ticket slips
- The paragraph frame can be written on the board and copied
- Two colours of pencil for marking setting and character lines separately; one pencil and a circle-versus-underline rule does the same job
The Ditch (Helper Version)
- Two things about the ditch that make it impossible to get round: ______ and ______
- The Scarecrow's idea for crossing (Chapter ___): ______
- The Scarecrow offers to go first because ______ .
- The Lion says he is afraid of ______ (Chapter ___). He crosses the ditch ___ times.
- Finish the paragraph: The problem in this part is ______ . It makes the Scarecrow show that ______ , and it makes the Lion show that ______ . Because they get across, the story can now ______ .
- Ledger Row 2 — the crossings in order: 1 ______ 2 ______ 3 ______ 4 ______
- Anchor question — everyone answers this one. At the ditch, which traveller does the most to get everyone across, and what does that show about him? I choose ______ because ______ .
- Check — I have a chapter number, and my last sentence says what happens next.
One Ditch, Three Proofs
- Setting — two details that rule out going round or climbing down: ______
- Characterization, Scarecrow (Chapter ___): the line where he works out the crossing ______
- Characterization, Scarecrow: the line where he offers to go first, and his reason ______
- Characterization, Lion (Chapter ___): what he says about falling ______ . Number of crossings: ___
- Conflict, in one sentence: ______
- The paragraph: name the conflict, say what it forces each of the two to reveal, and end with what it lets happen next. ______
- Ledger Row 2, events in order: ______
- Anchor question — everyone answers this one. At the ditch, which traveller does the most to get everyone across, and what does that show about him? ______
- Check — chapter numbers on both character lines, and a last sentence about what comes next rather than what just happened.
Two Obstacles, One Story
- The ditch: conflict, and what it makes each traveller reveal. ______
- A second obstacle from Chapter VIII: conflict, and what it makes them reveal. ______
- Which obstacle does more work for the story, and why — judge by what becomes possible afterwards, not by which is more exciting. ______
- One detail of setting that could be changed without changing the plot, and one that could not: ______
- Ledger Row 2, with the strongest single piece of evidence marked and a reason for the mark: ______
- Anchor question — everyone answers this one. At the ditch, which traveller does the most to get everyone across, and what does that show about him? ______ Then: name the strongest case against your choice.
- Check — the comparison rests on consequence, and both claims carry chapter numbers.
- gulf — a wide deep gap in the ground — the same thing the book has been calling a ditch (Chapter VII, used for the ditch once the crossing begins)
- jagged — sharp and uneven, with points sticking out (Chapter VII, the rocks at the bottom of the ditch)
- Kalidah — a monster in this book with a bear's body and a tiger's head; it is invented, so there is nothing to look up (Chapter VII, the beasts in the forest beyond the ditch)
- Setting details to accept: the ditch is very wide; it is very deep; there are big jagged rocks at the bottom; the sides are too steep to climb down; it divides the forest as far as they can see. Any two.
- The Scarecrow's plan: once the Lion says he thinks he could jump it, the Scarecrow is the one who turns that into a method — the Lion can carry them all over on his back, one at a time.
- The Scarecrow's offer: he goes first because if the Lion fails, Dorothy would be killed or the Woodman dented on the rocks, and a fall would not hurt him at all. This is the strongest single piece of evidence in the scene and students should be pushed toward it.
- The Lion: he says he is terribly afraid of falling, and then crosses four times in total — Scarecrow over, back, Dorothy and Toto over, back, Woodman over. Accept four; accept three if the student counts only the carries and can say so.
- The plot link: without the crossing the journey ends at the ditch. Getting across puts them into the country of the Kalidahs, which is what the next danger needs.
- What to score in the paragraph: whether the last sentence is about consequence. A paragraph that ends by restating the crossing has described the scene, not analysed it. That is the line to push on, and it is worth more than tidy sentences.
| Part of the standard | Practised in | Visible in |
|---|---|---|
| Setting | Step 1, students mark the two physical details of the ditch that make going round or climbing down impossible | Two marked details copied onto worksheet item 1 |
| Events | Step 5, students list the crossings in the order they happen while building Row 2 | The ordered event list in Ledger Row 2 |
| Conflict | Step 3 names what stands in the way and what it costs; Step 4 opens by stating the conflict in one sentence | The conflict sentence at the top of the framed paragraph |
| Characterization | Step 2 locates the Scarecrow's plan and his offer to go first; Step 3 locates the Lion saying he is terribly afraid of falling | Two quoted-by-location lines on worksheet items 2 and 3 |
| Contribute to the plot — the causal link between the four and what happens next | Step 4, the framed paragraph, which must say what the obstacle forces the characters to reveal and what it lets happen afterwards | The completed framed paragraph, collected |
- ELA.5.R.1.1 has no published clarification statement, so the five components are derived from the coordinated list in the benchmark text itself. Recorded here so a reviewer can see the derivation rather than assume a source.
- Catalogue access facts (text_on_screen, narration, illustrations_displayed) were not supplied for this title, so all three are assumed true and every mode is available. If Listening on this platform can mean text-off, the exact_wording sessions need rechecking.
3The Long Middle
Six chapters in one summary. Students order the events between the Emerald City and the melting of the Witch, cut the ones the chain does not need, and write 150 words that carry both what happens and what the stretch is about.
The six chapters between the Emerald City and the melting of the Witch are about people doing hard things while still believing they cannot.
This session runs in all three. How a student takes the book in is not the same question as how hard their work is.
- Inherits: Rows 1 and 2 of the Already-Had-It Ledger, for the pattern to summarise against.
- Leaves: A 150-word summary of Chapters IX-XIV carrying plot and theme, plus Row 3 of the Already-Had-It Ledger.
| Step | What to do |
|---|---|
| Open with the price | Read Oz setting his condition. Ask the question, take two answers, and write neither on the board. |
| Five events, in order | Students list five events from Chapters IX to XIV with a chapter number beside each, in the order they happen. Five exactly — the limit is the work. |
| Essential or not | The thumb test on each event in turn. Cross out, do not erase, anything the chain survives without. Students must be able to show what they cut. |
| Draft the summary | 150 words. It must run in order and it must contain one sentence saying what this stretch is about. Underline that sentence. |
| Row 3 | Complete Row 3 of the Already-Had-It Ledger from this stretch, choosing the moment where one of the three does the thing he says he cannot. |
| Exit ticket | Collect. |
Take any event you have written and cover it with your thumb. If the next event still makes sense, that event is not holding the chain together. Cross it out and keep going.
Word for word on all three worksheets, so one closing discussion covers the room. If a Support answer and an Extension answer would not belong in the same conversation, the session needs rewriting.
Give the event cards to order rather than events to generate, whatever tier the student is otherwise working at — the ordering is the same thinking with less production. Supply the theme sentence opener in writing. Allow the summary at 100 words rather than 150; the limit is there to force selection, and a lower limit forces it harder, not less.
- Event list page with five numbered lines and a word-count box
- The Already-Had-It Ledger, continued
- Eight pre-written event cards for the support tier
- Exit ticket slips
- The event cards can be written on scrap paper cut into eights
- A word count can be done by counting the words in one line and multiplying; students do not need a device
Six Chapters, One Summary (Helper Version)
- Put the event cards in the order they happen. Write the chapter number on each.
- The thumb test: cover each event. Does the next one still make sense? If yes, cross that card out.
- How many events did you keep? ___
- Finish the summary: After Oz tells them to ______ , the four travellers ______ . On the way ______ . In the end Dorothy ______ .
- Now the underlined sentence — finish it and underline it: This part of the book is really about ______ .
- Word count: ___ (aim for 100 or fewer)
- Ledger Row 3: the moment I chose, and who it is about: ______
- Anchor question — everyone answers this one. In one sentence, what is this stretch of the book about? Do not say what happens in it. This part is really about ______ .
- Check — my events are in order, and I have one sentence underlined.
The Long Middle
- Five events from Chapters IX-XIV, in order, with chapter numbers: 1 ______ 2 ______ 3 ______ 4 ______ 5 ______
- Thumb test — which did you cross out, and what told you it could go? ______
- Summary, 150 words or fewer. In order. One sentence underlined that says what this stretch is about. ______
- Word count: ___
- The sentence I underlined says what the stretch is ABOUT, not what happens in it: yes / no
- Ledger Row 3 — chapter and moment, who is being watched, what he says he lacks, what he actually does: ______
- Anchor question — everyone answers this one. In one sentence, what is this stretch of the book about? Do not say what happens in it. ______
- Check — 150 or fewer, in order, one underlined sentence, Row 3 complete through column four.
Two Summaries, One Stretch
- Summary A, with the underlined sentence about what the journey costs them: ______
- Summary B, with the underlined sentence about what they already are: ______
- Which version do Chapters IX-XIV support better? Name the two events that decide it. ______
- One event you kept in both, and why it cannot be cut from either: ______
- Ledger Row 3, with the moment chosen to fit the version you argued for, and a note saying why: ______
- Anchor question — everyone answers this one. In one sentence, what is this stretch of the book about? Do not say what happens in it. ______ Then: which of your two versions does the reading support better, and by which event?
- Check — both summaries under 150 words, and the judgement rests on named events.
- spectacles — eyeglasses — here, ones everyone must wear; not a show or a sight (Chapter X, the green spectacles locked on at the gate)
- charm — a set of words that makes magic happen — not a lucky object and not being charming (Chapter XII, the charm that calls the Winged Monkeys)
- Winkies — the people of the yellow country in the West, whom the Witch has forced to work for her (Chapters XII and XIII, the people the Witch has enslaved)
- Events that hold the chain: Oz sets the condition that they kill the Wicked Witch of the West (XI); they set out west and are attacked (XII); the Witch uses the Golden Cap to send the Winged Monkeys, who take Dorothy and the Lion and wreck the Scarecrow and the Woodman (XII); Dorothy is kept as a servant and the Witch takes one Silver Shoe (XII); Dorothy throws water and the Witch melts (XII); the Winkies repair the Scarecrow and the Woodman and Dorothy finds the Golden Cap (XIII); the Monkeys carry them back to the Emerald City (XIV).
- Events that usually get cut and should be: the field mice, the poppies, the green spectacles, the Kalidahs. All memorable, none load-bearing for this stretch. A student who cuts these has understood the test.
- Theme sentences at this grade that work: this part is about people doing hard things while still believing they cannot; or, this part is about what the travellers are willing to do for a promise from someone they have not seen. Accept any sentence that is about the book rather than about the plot.
- Theme sentences to push back on: anything that begins 'Dorothy and her friends go to...' — that is plot wearing a theme's clothes. Ask what it is about and wait.
- Row 3 candidates: the Lion agreeing to face the Witch, the Scarecrow devising the escape, the Woodman killing the wolves and weeping, or Dorothy commanding a witch's slave-cap. Any is defensible if column four names what was actually done.
| Part of the standard | Practised in | Visible in |
|---|---|---|
| Summarize — condense a long stretch by selecting what the account cannot do without | Step 2 lists five events; Step 3 removes any event the chain survives without | The crossed-out events on the event list, which are marked rather than erased so the judgement stays visible |
| Include plot — what happens, in order, with the causal links intact | Step 4, the drafted summary, which must run in order and hold together | The 150-word summary, collected |
| Include theme — what the stretch is about, not only what occurs in it | Step 1 opens the question and Step 4 requires at least one sentence that says what the stretch is about | The underlined theme sentence inside the summary; students are told to underline it so it can be found |
- Sub-part b of this benchmark — central idea and relevant details for an informational text — is the informational branch and is not triggered by a novel. It is not listed as a component because this session cannot honestly teach it, and marking it taught would put a claim in the record that the work does not support.
- Catalogue access facts (text_on_screen, narration, illustrations_displayed) were not supplied for this title, so all three are assumed true and every mode is available. If Listening on this platform can mean text-off, the exact_wording sessions need rechecking.
4Humbug
The chapter never defines the word the whole book turns on. Students work out three words from the lines around them, check two against a dictionary, then find the place where Oz tells one of the travellers outright that he already has what he came for — and fill the column of the ledger that has been empty since Session 1.
Oz says outright that each of them already has what he came for, and the chapter never once defines the word that tells you what Oz is.
This session runs in all three. How a student takes the book in is not the same question as how hard their work is.
- Inherits: Rows 1 to 3 of the Already-Had-It Ledger.
- Leaves: Three worked word entries, and column five filled on Rows 1 to 3.
| Step | What to do |
|---|---|
| Open on one word | Read the humbug exchange aloud and think aloud through the first part of it yourself: say what you notice, what you rule out, and what you are still unsure of. Do not land on the meaning. Stop while it is still open. |
| Work out three | Students work out humbug, ventriloquist and sharp using only the lines around them. Each entry needs a meaning and the exact words that led there. For sharp, both meanings are required, and which one the Lion intends. |
| Check two | Two of the three go to a dictionary. Students mark each close, partly right, or wrong, and write the dictionary wording next to their own. The mark is the work — being wrong and knowing it counts. |
| What Oz actually says | Students find and copy the sentence where Oz tells one of the three that he already has what he came for. Then, underneath, what that traveller asks for anyway. |
| Column five | Fill column five on Rows 1 to 3 of the Already-Had-It Ledger: what each was handed, and whether it changed anything he did. |
| Exit ticket | Collect. |
Read his next four lines. He is not pleased at being insulted; he is pleased at being correct. So what is he agreeing that he is?
Word for word on all three worksheets, so one closing discussion covers the room. If a Support answer and an Extension answer would not belong in the same conversation, the session needs rewriting.
Do not supply meanings for the three target words — that is the standard, and handing it over removes it from the students it was written for. Support the route instead: give the sentence containing each word on its own strip so the surrounding lines are not competing for attention, allow the meaning to be said before it is written, and accept a first-language gloss in the meaning column as long as the clue words beside it are copied from the English text. Pair a student with a partner for the dictionary step so the reference reading is shared.
- Word page with four columns: word, my meaning, the exact words that told me, check mark
- The Already-Had-It Ledger, continued from Session 3
- Exit ticket slips
- Dictionaries — one between three is enough at this step; a single classroom dictionary passed along the row also works, and a class glossary does not, because the point is an unfamiliar reference source
- The word page can be ruled into an exercise book as four columns
Three Words (Helper Version)
- humbug — the line is on the page marked for you. Which is closer: (a) someone pretending to be something they are not, (b) someone who is angry? ___ . The words that told me: ______
- ventriloquist — read the line where Oz says what he can do with his voice. My meaning: ______ . The words that told me: ______
- sharp — the Scarecrow has pins in his head and the Lion says he is sharp. Everyday meaning: ______ . What the Lion means: ______
- Dictionary check on two. Word ___ : close / partly right / wrong. Word ___ : close / partly right / wrong.
- Oz tells one of them he already has what he came for. Copy that sentence: ______
- Ledger column five, Rows 1-3: what he was handed ______ . Did it change what he did? yes / no
- Anchor question — everyone answers this one. What is Oz, and which exact words in the chapter told you? Oz is ______ . The words that told me: ______ .
- Check — every meaning has clue words next to it.
Working It Out
- humbug — my meaning: ______ . The exact words that led me there: ______
- ventriloquist — my meaning: ______ . The exact words that led me there: ______
- sharp — everyday meaning: ______ . The meaning the Lion intends: ______ . What in the sentence makes both available: ______
- A word related to one of these that helped me: ______ (try bran, bran-new, brains)
- Dictionary check, two of the three. Word ___ : my wording ______ / dictionary wording ______ / close, partly right, wrong.
- The sentence where Oz tells a traveller he already has what he came for: ______
- What that traveller asks for anyway: ______
- Ledger column five, Rows 1-3: what each was handed, and whether it changed anything he did. ______
- Anchor question — everyone answers this one. What is Oz, and which exact words in the chapter told you? ______
- Check — three meanings, three sets of clue words, two marks, both meanings of sharp, three rows finished.
A Fourth Way to Read It
- The three worked entries, with clue words: ______
- A fourth word or phrase in Chapters XV-XVII that a reader could take two ways: ______
- Both readings, written out: ______
- If a reader took the second reading, what would change about the sentence — or about Oz? ______
- Dictionary check on your fourth word: does the dictionary hold both readings, or only one? ______
- Ledger column five for Rows 1-3, with a note on the row where the handout changed least: ______
- Anchor question — everyone answers this one. What is Oz, and which exact words in the chapter told you? ______ Then: he calls himself a good man and a bad wizard. Which half does the chapter support?
- Check — clue words on everything, and the fourth word genuinely carries two readings rather than one broad one.
- humbug (Chapter XV, the Scarecrow names it and Oz agrees at once)
- ventriloquist (Chapter XV, Oz explaining how the Head seemed to speak)
- sharp (Chapter XVI, the Lion on the pins in the Scarecrow's head)
- bran (Chapter XVI, what the Wizard mixes with pins and needles)
- humbug — a person who pretends to be something they are not; a fraud. The clue is that Oz agrees at once, is pleased to be called it, and immediately explains that he is a common man supposed to be a Great Wizard. A student who says liar is close; ask whether Oz has lied about anything except himself.
- ventriloquist — someone who makes their voice seem to come from somewhere else. The clue is in the same breath: he says he can throw the sound of his voice wherever he wishes, which is why the Head seemed to speak.
- sharp — everyday meaning, having a point or edge, which is literally true because pins and needles are sticking out of the Scarecrow's head. The Lion means clever. Both are live in the sentence and that is the joke. Accept clever, quick, or smart for the intended meaning.
- Word relationships worth surfacing: the Wizard fills the Scarecrow's head with bran and calls them bran-new brains. Bran, brand-new and brains are all doing work in one line. Students who spot it have found a real relationship, not a coincidence.
- The sentence in step 4 — any of three works: to the Scarecrow, that he does not need brains because he is learning something every day; to the Lion, that true courage is facing danger when you are afraid and he has that in plenty; to the Woodman, that he is in luck not to have a heart.
- Column five, expected: bran mixed with pins and needles; a silk heart stuffed with sawdust; a drink out of a green bottle. The second half of the column is the one to read carefully — nothing any of them does afterwards is new, and a student who writes no under did it change anything has read the chapter properly.
- Do not correct a wrong-but-reasoned entry into a right one during the lesson. The mark on the dictionary line is the evidence for this standard; a corrected page shows nothing about how the student got there.
| Part of the standard | Practised in | Visible in |
|---|---|---|
| Use context clues to determine meaning | Step 2, each of the three words is worked out and the exact surrounding words that led there are written down | The clue column on the word page — a meaning with no clue beside it is not accepted |
| Use word relationships to determine meaning | Step 2, students connect bran to bran-new and to brains, and connect the pins in the Scarecrow's head to the Lion's use of sharp | The related-words line on the word page for at least one of the three entries |
| Use reference materials to determine meaning | Step 3, two of the three worked entries are checked in a dictionary | The close / partly right / wrong mark beside two entries, with the dictionary wording noted |
| Determine the meaning of unknown words and phrases | Step 2, humbug and ventriloquist are worked out cold — neither is defined for students at any point | The meaning column for those two entries |
| Determine the meaning of multiple-meaning words | Step 2, sharp is worked out in the Lion's line, where the everyday meaning is present in the same sentence as the intended one | The word page requires both meanings of sharp to be written, and which one the Lion means |
- The benchmark joins its strategies with and/or. This session teaches context clues, word relationships and reference materials, and reaches figurative language through the Lion's use of sharp. Background knowledge is addressed only through the opening think-aloud named in Clarification 1. The components list what the session actually teaches rather than every route the benchmark permits.
- The teacher key is marked do-not-distribute. Every answer in it is the answer students are supposed to work out, and a copy left on a desk would remove the standard from the lesson.
- Catalogue access facts (text_on_screen, narration, illustrations_displayed) were not supplied for this title, so all three are assumed true and every mode is available. If Listening on this platform can mean text-off, the exact_wording sessions need rechecking.
5Glinda's Sentence
Glinda says the shoes would have worked on day one. Students draft a theme sentence for the whole book, place three ledger rows to show where the idea first appears, where it gets complicated and where it is clearest, then find the row that argues against their own sentence and revise it once.
Glinda's one sentence turns the whole journey into a question the book has been asking since the beginning, and the three friends answer it differently.
This session runs in all three. How a student takes the book in is not the same question as how hard their work is.
- Inherits: All Already-Had-It Ledger rows with column five filled.
- Leaves: A theme statement citing three ledger rows, plus one named row that argues against it.
| Step | What to do |
|---|---|
| Open with Glinda | Read the line about the shoes carrying her home the first day. Wait through the reaction. Then ask only: so what has this book been doing for twenty-two chapters? |
| Draft a theme | One sentence about the whole book. No character names in it. Anyone who writes Dorothy or Scarecrow starts again — the rule is what forces it up from plot. |
| First, complicated, clearest | Students choose three ledger rows and place them: where the idea first shows, where it gets complicated, where it is clearest. Chapter numbers required, and the three must come from three different parts of the book. |
| Test it three times | Hold the sentence against each placed row in turn and write why it holds or strains. If it fails on one, the sentence changes and the row stays. Say that rule out loud before they start. |
| Find the row that fights it | Read what the Scarecrow, the Woodman and the Lion say to Glinda straight after her line. Students name the ledger row that argues against their own sentence, and write why it does. |
| Revise and add Row 5 | One rewrite of the sentence, then Row 5 of the Already-Had-It Ledger for Dorothy and the Silver Shoes. |
Read the next three speeches. All three friends answer her immediately. Put what they say against your sentence and see which one has to bend.
Word for word on all three worksheets, so one closing discussion covers the room. If a Support answer and an Extension answer would not belong in the same conversation, the session needs rewriting.
Give the no-names rule as a written model rather than only as an instruction — show one sentence with names and the same sentence without. Supply the three connective openers for the reason lines: this row supports it because, this row strains it because, this row argues against it because. Allow the rewrite to be dictated to a partner who scribes, and assess the reasoning rather than the sentence construction.
- Theme page with a sentence box, a three-stage strip and three reason lines
- The completed Already-Had-It Ledger, Rows 1 to 4
- Three candidate theme sentences on a slip, for the support tier
- The three-stage strip can be drawn as three boxes across a page
- The ledger rows can be read from the students' own sheets; no new copy is needed
What Is This Book Saying? (Helper Version)
- Choose one sentence to test: (a) People often already have what they think they need. (b) Believing you can do something can matter as much as being able to. (c) A long journey can change nothing and still be worth taking.
- My chosen sentence: ______ . It has no character names in it: yes / no
- Where the idea FIRST shows — Row ___ , Chapter ___ . It supports my sentence because ______ .
- Where it gets COMPLICATED — Row ___ , Chapter ___ . It strains my sentence because ______ .
- Where it is CLEAREST — Row ___ , Chapter ___ . It supports my sentence because ______ .
- The row that ARGUES AGAINST my sentence — Row ___ . It argues against it because ______ .
- My sentence, rewritten once: ______
- Ledger Row 5 — Dorothy and the Silver Shoes: ______
- Anchor question — everyone answers this one. Which ledger row argues against your own theme sentence, and why does it? Row ___ argues against it because ______ .
- Check — three chapter numbers, and they are not all from the same part of the book.
Glinda's Sentence
- My theme sentence, no character names: ______
- FIRST SHOWN — Row ___ , Chapter ___ . Why: ______
- COMPLICATED — Row ___ , Chapter ___ . Why: ______
- CLEAREST — Row ___ , Chapter ___ . Why: ______
- My three chapters are ___ , ___ and ___ . They span more than one part of the book: yes / no
- The row that argues against my sentence — Row ___ , and why it does: ______
- Did my sentence have to change after testing? yes / no. If yes, what changed and which row forced it: ______
- My sentence, rewritten once: ______
- Ledger Row 5, Dorothy and the Silver Shoes, through column five: ______
- Anchor question — everyone answers this one. Which ledger row argues against your own theme sentence, and why does it? ______
- Check — no names in the sentence, three reasons written, one row named as arguing against.
Two Sentences, One Book
- Sentence A: ______
- Sentence B: ______
- The same three rows, tested against both. Where do they agree, and where do they split? ______
- Which sentence does the book support better, and by what evidence: ______
- What does the losing sentence explain that the winning one does not? ______
- The three friends' answer to Glinda — which of your two sentences survives it? ______
- Ledger Row 5, with a note on which sentence Dorothy's row belongs to: ______
- Anchor question — everyone answers this one. Which ledger row argues against your own theme sentence, and why does it? ______ Then: does that row break your sentence, or only bend it?
- Check — both sentences nameless, both tested on the same rows, and the cost of the choice stated.
- Quadlings — the people Glinda rules, in the last country the travellers cross (Chapters XXII and XXIII, the people of the red country in the South)
- comrades — companions who have been through something together (Chapter XXIII, Dorothy parting from her loving comrades)
- brittle — hard but easily broken, like a plate (Chapter XX, the china country)
- Theme sentences that work at this grade: people often already have the thing they believe they are missing; believing you have something can do the work of having it; a journey can change nothing about a person and still be worth taking. Accept any nameless sentence that is about the book.
- Sentences to send back: anything containing Dorothy, Oz, or the Scarecrow, and anything that is a plot summary with the word learns bolted on. Send it back once, not twice — the second attempt is almost always better.
- First shown: Row 1, the beetle, Chapter VI. Complicated: Row 3 or Row 4, where the gifts are handed over and change nothing, Chapters XV-XVI. Clearest: Row 5, Glinda and the shoes, Chapter XXIII. Other orders are defensible if the reason lines carry them.
- The row that fights it — this is the point of the session. Straight after Glinda's line, the Scarecrow says he would have stayed in the cornfield, the Woodman that he would have rusted in the forest, and the Lion that he would have lived a coward forever. All three say the journey was necessary, immediately after the book has suggested it was not. A student who names this and writes why has done the work of the standard.
- Look for whether the sentence actually changed after testing. A student whose sentence survived three tests untouched either found a strong one or did not test it. Ask which row came closest to breaking it; the answer tells you which.
- Row 5, column five: Dorothy is handed nothing. She had the shoes from Chapter III. Students who notice that column five is empty for her have found the strongest evidence in the ledger, and it is worth saying so to the room.
| Part of the standard | Practised in | Visible in |
|---|---|---|
| Identify a theme, stated or implied — the book never says this outright, so it must be inferred | Step 2, one sentence about the whole book with no character names allowed in it | The drafted theme sentence at the top of the theme page |
| Explain — give the reasoning, not only the claim | Step 4, each of the three tests requires a written reason for why the row supports or strains the sentence | The three reason lines beneath the placed rows |
| The development — how the idea changes across the book rather than sitting still | Step 3, students place three rows as first shown, complicated, and clearest, with chapter references | The three-stage strip on the theme page, in chapter order |
| Throughout a literary text — evidence drawn from across the whole book, not one stretch | Step 3 requires the three rows to come from three different sessions' reading; Step 5 adds the closing chapter | Chapter numbers on the three-stage strip, which must span more than one third of the book |
- Catalogue access facts (text_on_screen, narration, illustrations_displayed) were not supplied for this title, so all three are assumed true and every mode is available. If Listening on this platform can mean text-off, the exact_wording sessions need rechecking.
6Was the Journey Necessary?
Every student delivers a two-minute argument answering one question: was the journey to Oz necessary? They must use two ledger rows that pull in different directions and land on a position. Delivery is marked and rehearsed before it is performed, so the speaking choices are decisions rather than accidents.
Whether the journey was necessary is a real question, and the ledger holds evidence on both sides of it.
This session runs in all three. How a student takes the book in is not the same question as how hard their work is.
- Inherits: The theme statement from Session 5 and two Already-Had-It Ledger rows that point different ways.
- Leaves: nothing — this is the closer
| Step | What to do |
|---|---|
| Model the shape | Thirty seconds badly paced, thirty seconds right. Take the answer from the room. Then name the shape: claim, one row, one row, position — and say what you did with your posture while doing it. |
| Plan and mark delivery | Four note cards, one per part of the shape. Then two marks on them: one nonverbal choice, one from volume, pronunciation or pacing. Also a named word to practise saying clearly. |
| Rehearsal feedback | In pairs, one rehearsal each. The partner gives two comments and names which part of the delivery each is about. Comments that do not name a part get sent back. |
| Deliver both ways | Speaker A delivers two minutes while B completes the listener check. Swap. Allow the full slot for both rounds and the changeover — it will not fit in less. |
| Close and collect | Two students deliver to the whole class, chosen for having rows that disagree rather than for polish. Collect every listener check and every set of note cards. |
If both your rows say the same thing, nobody has asked you a question yet. Go back to the ledger and find the row that fights you.
Word for word on all three worksheets, so one closing discussion covers the room. If a Support answer and an Extension answer would not belong in the same conversation, the session needs rewriting.
Frames for the opening and closing lines only, leaving the argument itself to the student: I think the journey was / was not necessary, because and that is why I think. Allow a rehearsal recorded in advance, or a first delivery to a single partner rather than a pair. Let the student choose their own pronunciation word rather than being assigned one. Assess the argument and the delivery choices separately from accent — a marked, attempted delivery choice is the evidence, not how close the vowel lands.
- Listener check card, one per student
- The completed Already-Had-It Ledger and the Session 5 theme page
- Printed delivery-choice list of four, for the support tier
- Note cards, four per student — an index card cut in four does it
- A timer visible to the room — a projected phone timer, or a student keeping time on the wall clock
My Argument (Helper Version)
- My claim: The journey to Oz WAS / WAS NOT necessary.
- Row 1 I will use: Row ___ , Chapter ___ . It shows ______ .
- Row 2 I will use: Row ___ , Chapter ___ . It shows the opposite because ______ .
- My delivery marks — circle one: stand still here / look up here / say this line with feeling. Circle one more: slow down on ______ / say louder ______ / practise saying ______ .
- The word I will practise saying clearly: ______
- My position, after both rows: ______
- Anchor question — everyone answers this one. Was the journey to Oz necessary? Give one ledger row that says yes and one that says no. Yes row: ___ . No row: ___ .
- Check — claim first, two rows that disagree, position last, both marks used.
Two Rows, One Position
- Claim, in one sentence: ______
- Row A (Row ___ , Chapter ___): what it shows, and why it supports my claim ______
- Row B (Row ___ , Chapter ___): what it shows, and why it complicates my claim ______
- My two rows genuinely pull in different directions: yes / no
- My position, after holding both: ______
- Delivery mark 1, nonverbal: ______ . Delivery mark 2, volume / pronunciation / pacing: ______ .
- The word I will practise saying clearly: ______
- Where I will look up from my cards: ______
- Anchor question — everyone answers this one. Was the journey to Oz necessary? Give one ledger row that says yes and one that says no. ______
- Check — claim first, two rows that disagree, position stated, both marks used, one word named.
Argue It and Answer Back
- Claim: ______
- Row A and Row B, with the tension between them named in one sentence: ______
- The strongest question the room could ask me: ______
- My answer to it, without abandoning my position: ______
- Where I will adjust pace or emphasis if the room looks lost: ______
- The counter-argument I find hardest to answer, and why I still hold my position: ______
- Anchor question — everyone answers this one. Was the journey to Oz necessary? Give one ledger row that says yes and one that says no. ______ Then: answer the strongest objection without abandoning your position.
- Check — claim, two rows, position, counter-question answered, marks used.
- Row pairs that work: Row 5, Glinda saying the shoes would have worked on day one, against Row 2, the ditch, where the Scarecrow's plan is the only reason anyone gets any further. One says the journey was unnecessary; the other says nothing would have happened without it.
- Row pairs that also work: Row 4, the gifts changing nothing, against the three friends' answer to Glinda, where all three say the journey made them. That pair is the sharpest in the book and should be pointed out to anyone still hunting.
- Row pairs that do not work: Row 1 with Row 2. Both show a traveller doing what he says he cannot, and they agree. A student who has chosen these has picked the easy argument and should be sent back.
- Read the listener claim lines first. If a listener could not write the speaker's claim in their own words, either the claim was unclear or the listener was not listening — comparing that card against the speaker's note cards tells you which.
- Collect the note cards. A student who marked look up here and practise saying Quadlings has made two real decisions. Accept marks that did not come off on the night: at this grade the choosing is the work, and a delivery choice attempted and missed is stronger evidence than one never made.
- Positions to accept: yes it was necessary, no it was not, and it was necessary for the three but not for Dorothy. The third is the strongest answer in the room and is available from the ledger, because column five is empty on Dorothy's row alone.
| Part of the standard | Practised in | Visible in |
|---|---|---|
| Present information orally | Step 4, the two-minute delivery to a partner; Step 5, two students deliver to the room | The listener check card completed for every speaker |
| In a logical sequence | Step 1 models claim, row, row, position; Step 2 builds the four note cards in that order | The note cards, collected, and the order item on the listener check |
| Nonverbal cues — posture | Step 2, students mark one nonverbal choice on their cards; posture is one of the five offered | The marked card and the nonverbal row of the listener check |
| Nonverbal cues — tone and expressive delivery | Step 1 the teacher names their own; Step 3 the partner must name which part of delivery each comment is about | The two written feedback comments, each labelled with the part of delivery it addresses |
| Nonverbal cues — focus on the audience and facial expression | Step 2, students mark where they will look up from the cards; Step 4 requires it to be attempted | The look-up mark on the note cards and the audience-focus item on the listener check |
| Appropriate volume | Step 2 delivery mark; Step 3 feedback names it when it is the comment given | The volume item on the listener check |
| Clear pronunciation | Step 2, students name one word from their argument to practise saying clearly — Quadlings and ventriloquist are the usual choices | The named word on the cards and the pronunciation item on the listener check |
| Appropriate pacing | Step 2 delivery mark; Step 4 the two-minute limit makes pace a decision rather than a habit | The pacing item on the listener check |
- The benchmark's nonverbal cues are split into three components rather than one, following Clarification 1, which enumerates posture, tone, expressive delivery, audience focus and facial expression. A single merged row would let a student score on posture alone and never look at the audience.
- Catalogue access facts (text_on_screen, narration, illustrations_displayed) were not supplied for this title, so all three are assumed true and every mode is available. If Listening on this platform can mean text-off, the exact_wording sessions need rechecking.
Entry diagnostic — 10 minutes
When Dorothy stood in the doorway and looked around, she could see nothing but the great gray prairie on every side. Not a tree nor a house broke the broad sweep of flat country that reached to the edge of the sky in all directions. The sun had baked the plowed land into a gray mass, with little cracks running through it. Even the grass was not green, for the sun had burned the tops of the long blades until they were the same gray color to be seen everywhere. Once the house had been painted, but the sun blistered the paint and the rains washed it away, and now the house was as dull and gray as everything else.
Can they read it
- Name the two adults Dorothy lives with, and write down what the passage says each one is.
- The passage says the house was one room. List four items the passage puts inside it.
- Which color does the passage use again and again for the land, the grass and the house?
What they bring
- Write about a place you know that looks the same in all directions. What is it like to stand in the middle of it?
- When a grown-up you know looks tired, what do you notice first about them?
One skill probe
The book says the sun and wind had taken the sparkle from Aunt Em's eyes and left them a sober gray. What does that sentence suggest about Aunt Em now, and which words in it led you there?
Mid-unit check — after Session 3
Three of the five ledger rows are built and column five is still empty on all of them. That is the point where the pattern is visible but the payoff has not arrived, so a student who has been copying rather than reading shows up clearly — and there is still time to fix it before Session 4 asks them to judge whether the gifts changed anything.
Run down one student's ledger
- Row 1 column four is in the student's own words, not the book's sentence copied out.
- Every filled cell across Rows 1 to 3 carries a chapter number.
- Row 2 names both the Scarecrow's plan and the Lion's admission, not just one of them.
- Row 3 names a moment where a traveller does the thing he says he cannot — not simply an exciting event from the stretch.
- Column five is empty on all three rows.
If you see it, do this
Take one row and cover the book. Ask the student to say what happened out loud, write down exactly what they say, and show them that what they just said is column four. Two minutes, individually, while the class works.
Revisit Session 1.
Put Row 1 and Row 3 side by side and ask what Row 1 is watching. Then ask who is being watched in Row 3, and what he says he cannot do. Rebuild Row 3 from that question, not from the chapter.
Revisit Session 2.
Culminating rubric
A two-minute spoken argument answering whether the journey to Oz was necessary, built on two ledger rows that point different ways and ending on a stated position.
| What is judged | 4 | 3 | 2 | 1 |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| Claim and position | A claim is stated in the first fifteen seconds, held through both rows, and restated at the end as a position that accounts for the row that argued against it. | A claim is stated near the start and a position is stated at the end, and the two match. | A claim is stated somewhere in the two minutes, or a position is reached at the end, but not both. | The talk describes the ledger rows without stating what the speaker thinks. |
| Two rows that pull different ways | Two rows are used, the tension between them is named out loud, and the speaker says why the opposing row does not overturn the position. | Two rows are used and they genuinely point different ways. | Two rows are used but both support the claim, so no tension is heard. | One row, or none — the argument runs on assertion. |
| Logical sequence | Claim, row, row, position, delivered in that order, with a spoken link between each part that tells the listener where they are. | Claim, row, row, position, delivered in that order. | The four parts are all present but arrive out of order, so a listener has to reassemble them. | Parts are missing or repeated, and the listener cannot write down the claim afterwards. |
| Nonverbal cues — posture and audience focus | Stands settled, looks up at the listener at the marked point and at least twice more, and returns to the cards without losing the thread. | Stands settled and looks up at the listener at the point marked on the cards. | Stands settled or looks up, but not both, and the marked look-up point passes unused. | Reads the cards throughout with no look-up attempted. |
| Nonverbal cues — tone and expressive delivery | The voice changes between the supporting row and the opposing row, so a listener can hear which is which without being told. | The line marked for expressive delivery is delivered differently from the lines around it. | One flat register throughout, though the delivery mark was made on the cards. | No delivery mark was made on the cards. |
| Appropriate volume | Audible to a listener at the far side of the room throughout, including on the opposing row where speakers usually drop. | Audible to the partner throughout. | Audible at the start and fades, or rises and falls unpredictably. | The listener has to ask for a repeat. |
| Clear pronunciation | The word named on the cards is said clearly, and the speaker slows for it deliberately rather than rushing past. | The word named on the cards is said clearly. | A word was named on the cards but was skipped or replaced during delivery. | No word was named on the cards. |
| Appropriate pacing | Lands between one minute forty and two minutes, and pauses after the claim so the listener can take it in. | Lands between one minute thirty and two minutes without being cut off. | Finishes far early or is still going when time is called. | Pace makes the argument hard to follow — words run together, or long stalls break the sequence. |
| Answering a question from the room without abandoning the position beyond grade | Takes the question, answers it directly, and either holds the position with a reason or changes it and says what changed their mind. | Takes the question and answers it without losing the position. | Takes the question and restates the original argument instead of answering it. | No question taken. |
Student reflection — 5 minutes
- Which of your two ledger rows was harder to explain out loud, and what made it harder?
- You marked two delivery choices on your cards. Which one actually happened, and which one got away from you?
- Name one thing you would do differently if you delivered this again tomorrow. Say what you would change, not how you felt about it.
- Someone in the room argued the opposite of you. What is the strongest part of their case?
What this plan does not do
- There is no extended written outcome. Students write in every session, but the unit ends in speech and never asks for a full drafted essay.
- Chapters XIX to XXII are read but not planned. The Fighting Trees, the China Country and the Hammer-Heads sit outside the through-line and are left as reading.
- Session 3 covers the widest span of reading in the unit. Split it across two periods if the class reads slowly.
- The reading load assumes read-aloud or supported reading for part of the class; 1900 prose at 24 chapters is a real load for grade 5.
Considered and left out
Everything below was weighed against the book and refused. It is here so you can see where the line was drawn.
| Skill | Why not | Reason |
|---|---|---|
| Fluency practice | WEEKLY | Runs unchanged with any grade 5 novel. Baum's prose is easy enough that it would not even be the right novel for it. |
| Spelling and word patterns | WEEKLY | Nothing in this book makes it the text for that work. |
| Figurative language as its own session (ELA.5.R.3.1) | MERGED | Absorbed into Session 4, where the context work already runs. |
| Narrator and point of view | EVIDENCE | Steady third person from first page to last. There is no shift to analyse, so a session would be about the absence of a technique. |
| Compare primary and secondary sources (ELA.5.R.3.3) | SWAP | There are no sources in a single-novel unit. It would import material from outside the book. |
| Cursive writing (ELA.5.C.1.1) | SWAP | Unrelated to any book. |
| Research to answer a question (ELA.5.C.4.1) | SWAP | Would send students away from the text at the point the unit needs them inside it. |
| Text structures and features (ELA.5.R.2.1) | EVIDENCE | An informational-text benchmark. This novel offers headings and chapter titles and nothing else to analyse. |
| Narrative writing (ELA.5.C.1.2) | SWAP | A strong activity that would run identically with any novel. The unit's writing serves the argument instead. |
| The Dainty China Country (Chapter XX) | GRADE | A self-contained episode that sits outside the through-line. Read it; do not build on it. |